In reading this week we have been creating a checklist around our writing shapes and evaluating and comparing this to a good biography.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Alliterative Subheading | |
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Early life | |
School life | |
Later life | |
World Recognition | |
Memory box | |
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Awesome work Lauren, I can see you have evaluated the effectiveness of this text for its purposes which you have shown through your checklist. What did you find most interesting about reading about Barack Obama?
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