My Writing

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Today in Week 6 Term 4 we have been learning about Poems by Micheal Rosen's .  At the start we had to watch a video of him doing Chocolate Cake and them we had to notice what he was including in his Chocolate Cake Poem and how he was making it funny to make people in his audience laugh and the people who are at home watching it to.  Then after that we had to watch more video's and what he has include in the Chocolate Cake Poem.  For our Create we had to think about when was the last time we were in trouble and record it on a Screencastify, 

Here Is My create 

Reading

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This week for reading we are looking at Michael Rosen's amazing poems.  In my workshop we Talked about  what one of Michael Rosen's poems we can do in the end I had chosen Don't  this poem is about Micheal as a child how adults would tell him what to do and what not to do.  my create this week was Using this poem as inspiration, create a picture of the image that your have visualised while reading it.

 my goal was visualise using all of the senses, and talk about how this enriches meaning. 

what is your Favourite poem?

What do you rate My work of of ten?

House of Bricks Reflection

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earlier this year Tumu hub had house of bricks visit here is my reflection.

My favourite Lego activity was the race cars because it was fun working with my teammate and changing the bits that we did wrong. My partner and I didn't make it to the top 5. 

My least favourite Lego activity was in Kaupeka because in my group the Kaupeka students didn't listen and pulled apart all the bricks that my friends and I put down and made them into towers.

The activity that tested my perseverance the most was the mosaic because once I had done one design I had no clue what to do next. I struggled finding something new but with a good look around the room I still had no clue what to do. In the end I made a new one that took a lot of grit.

The challenging activity was the towers because  we struggled for 15 minutes to build a tower. We came last because the tower broke at the last minute but we still worked really hard. There was one thing I didn’t like was that we had a group of ten and if we got into smaller groups we could have got a lot more done in the time we had. 

I enjoyed working collaboratively with others because we could share our ideas with each other and ask for help/advice. I would love to work in smaller groups more often.  

Have you been to see the house of bricks?

My Reading!

Kia ora and welcome back to my blog. I´m Lauren and I am going to be talking about my reading create!

In  my reading work shop on Tuesday  me and my class mates read about pollution what it is and who we can make less. pollution is stuff thatś  bad for the environment and the earth and we can stop have this problem if we you´s stuff that´s not plastic.

Here is my create... 

What do you think of my work this week?

Magnificent Maths!

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This week my goals are:Goals: read and order any number up to 1000 000, order unit fractions 1/10, 1 /8, 1 /4 , 1 /2., read any fraction. this week the main goal we focused on was order any unit fractions. In the work shop we watched some videos on what order unit fractions.

Here is my create 

I think I did well this week because I made my work clear and easy to understand.

I think I did well in my work this week.

what do you think I can do better on my work this week?  

Reading!!!

 Kia Ora Bloggers,

This week for reading we had two goals we needed prove. Our Goals were to use reference sources (e.g.,online/ dictionaries and thesauruses, google ‘define’ ) to find the meanings of new words Ask higher level questions about the text, such as 'why' and 'how'. Make connections between Texts.

In our workshop we read an article called Possum Problem, while reading the article we made questions. After the workshop we wrote five words we did not know from the text and went online dictionaries and thesauruses' to find out the meaning of those words.

Here is my word meanings doc:

Now moving on to our create. Our create was to make up five questions using why, how and should.

Here is my create:

What can I do better Next week?

Gospel Refction

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This week for RE we have been learning about Mark 10:  35 - 45 

Georgia and I made an Animation on this weeks gospel. We needed to include a clear understanding of the gospel.

The main massage  of the gospel is if you want to be great be a servant.

I think we did well in our work this week because we gave a clear understanding of the gospel this week.

I think we did a really good job and there is nothing I think I can do beater what do you think?  

Here is My Create...

What do you think of My work this week?

Pursuesvie writing

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This week we have been doing persuasive writing and the topic I chose was 'Kids should not watch TV before bed on a school night.'  My goal was to - Use Vary sentence beginnings, structures and length. Write simple and compound sentences (by using conjunctions). Use some complex sentences. Use simple and compound sentences with a variety of beginnings, lengths and structures. Use some complex sentences to create pace, flow and interest. Use linking words and phrases to link some paragraphs.  

 I did well this week because I manged to persuaed my sister not to watch TV before bed.

Next time I can do better by coming up with better ideas.

What do you think I can do better next time?

Do you think you can do some Pursuesvie writing