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Friday, August 6, 2021

Umbrella

Welcome back to my blog!


This week we watched a short film called umbrella we wrote a short sniped of the video.
I loved every thing that I did this week.

I did well this week because  I made my work different to others and I used my own ideas. I really enjoyed doing this snipped of writing. 







Did you like my work this week? 
Do you have any feedback for next time?

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  1. Sue FAugust 31, 2021 at 7:14 PM

    An interesting way of presenting your writing Lauren, only being able to see a small part at a time. It's like a story in poetry form.
    Where did the umbrella go - Could this be chapter 2?

    Have you got an umbrella? What colour is it?

    Thanks for sharing.

    Mrs Ferguson

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