Kia ora Hi and welcome back to my rangitaki - Blog
This week for reading we are looking at Michael Rosen's amazing poems. In my workshop we Talked about what one of Michael Rosen's poems we can do in the end I had chosen Don't this poem is about Micheal as a child how adults would tell him what to do and what not to do. my create this week was Using this poem as inspiration, create a picture of the image that your have visualised while reading it.
my goal was visualise using all of the senses, and talk about how this enriches meaning.
what is your Favourite poem?
What do you rate My work of of ten?
Kia Ora Lauren,
ReplyDeleteI love your work this week is is extraordinary! I love the use of te reo and how you said what it means in English. Maybe next time remember to add a reflection in your blog and use capital letters. My favuite poem is Don't by Michael Rosen and your work is about a 7.5!
How do you rate my comment?
-Georgia
Hi Georgia,
DeleteThanks for commenting on my blog and I rate your comment about 7.9!
I will Keep your feedback in mind
- Lauren
Kia Ora,
DeleteThanks for replying to my comment! Thank you for rating my comment pretty high. Next time you should add a little bit more sentences. Aslo you should add a comment at the end of your comment. What is you second favourite poem from Michael Rosen?
-Georgia
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