My mum is kind and caring but when it comes to ice cream my mum is loving . I love my mum and that's all i gotta say.
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Wednesday, May 6, 2020
for mothers day i wrote a poem no my mum
My mum is kind and caring but when it comes to ice cream my mum is loving . I love my mum and that's all i gotta say.
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Hi Lauren,
ReplyDeleteWhat lovely things to say about your Mum. She must give you ice cream which you like. Aren't you lucky to have such a wonderful mum. Did you do this for Mothers Day?